Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Schizoid

Your eyes were like a copper field,
My breath just a field of grey.

I drew you in without an exhale,
Like wind captured in a bottle.

I wanted to be nothing more than a mere shadow.
And that's what I became.

No one even heard of me.

But when I shattered the glass that held you,
I swear, the entire world knew.


4 comments:

rivercat said...

" I drew you in without an exhalelike wind captured in a bottle"

I love the this one and really is inspiring to read phrases like the above xx

S. said...

Ah! This is perfect. "I wanted to be nothing more than a mere shadow / And that's what I became."

I am, again, blown away.

Brittany said...

Thank so so much! I feel truly inspired and motivated by your kind words

:)!!

Through Jam's Eyes said...

Beautiful

the truth about freedom

The space between inhale and exhale the space between stars fill up with air, and collapse into dust I walk a sunlit path and breath...